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I am lost

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 12-29-1999 01:17 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I am lost

Oh I wish I were trapped in a grand devised maze
At least there would be an offering of some hope
But alas no walls there to swallow embrace
Nor do tears trickle tracks down my long face
I can only see the imagery of walking in fetters

Iím not lost from God I am quite spoken for
My heart beats the pace I walk forward in faith
But my body seeks more sustenance indeed
So singularly I seek what I really donít need
Iím not lost Iím just a weak fool Oh I feel better!!




[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 12-29-1999).]
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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 12-29-1999 03:11 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Quite a clever poem, this...and sustenance~seeking can, indeed, lead to introduction of that mistakenly lost fool in us all. I enjoyed it.
Severn
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2 posted 12-29-1999 03:51 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Interesting Walt - and like Meadow said it is clever. We often think we need what we don't - and most find out too late.
whiskey
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3 posted 12-29-1999 04:17 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very good poem, Your talented , I like it
First__Knight
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4 posted 12-29-1999 04:29 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Don't worry Walt..I am a weak fool too  
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-30-1999 02:43 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Hey, we should start a weak fools club =o)  j/m  I like your poem, a lot of thought in it!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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6 posted 12-30-1999 09:26 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

There you are - I found you....
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