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Until We Meet Again

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Tamera
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since 12-28-1999
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0 posted 12-29-1999 12:41 AM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Tamera

You came to me at a time when life was incomplete,
I loved you so, you had to go, another time to meet.
Our time together was so short, I never had a chance,
to give you love, to hold you close, to even cast a glance.
You must have known I needed time to reach inside my soul,
to listen for directions and to achieve my goals.
You saved me from destroying the spirit inside of me,
in doing so you gave me hope that we were meant to be.
I never have forgotten how close I felt to you,
and praying to the heavens you'd forgive me too.
I needed faith at the time to carry me through pain,
the memory of wanting you forever will remain.
I think of you so often, yet time has made me see,
that at the time you came, we were not meant to be.
Yet it seems like only yesterday I was planning for our time,
I still think of all the things we'd do together on our climb.
I feel that I will see you, before this journey ends,
and your mother I will be as well as new bestfriends.
Thanking you is not enough for what you saved me from,
you knew that I would crumble, then who would I become.
The years have passed and I have nourished my spirit once again,
I have grown and learned so much, I no longer will pretend.
I cannot wait to touch your face and hold you in my arms,
just like I've done a thousand times in my dreams so charmed.
One day we will run and play my baby girl, my friend,
and I'll keep seeing you in my dreams, until we meet again...

© Copyright 1999 Tamera - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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1 posted 12-29-1999 12:43 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Truly, deeply and exquisitely lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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2 posted 12-29-1999 01:49 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

Poignant and haunting, this lovely poem stopped me in my tracks.  Thank you for sharing.
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-30-1999 02:37 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautifully written, I could feel the emotion in it as I read it!  Very touching!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

caroline
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4 posted 12-30-1999 08:03 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Oh this is so very, very beautiful...magnificently done. Such emotion...I can feel the longing, yet sense the peace you've come to find in knowing that you will be together again. A wonderful poem, Tamera.

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


whiskey
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5 posted 12-30-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Wonderful so beautiful , the emotion it made me feel
Betty Gravitt
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6 posted 12-30-1999 09:09 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Tamera, thank you so much for this. I too lost a little girl, and have this faith that we will be together again. Thank you.

 B Gravitt


Local Rebel
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since 12-21-1999
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7 posted 12-30-1999 03:04 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

Very hard to experience.  You're writing is exquisite though.

Peace
Tamera
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8 posted 12-30-1999 06:19 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Thank you for the comments and "support". Although this happened sometime ago, I am truly at peace with it now...I do have a certain longing, but I think that remains forever. of course, until we meet again..
Tamera
Denise
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9 posted 12-30-1999 10:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is so touching and beautiful, Tamera. I'm sorry for your loss.

 Denise

Richard
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since 12-27-1999
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10 posted 12-30-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Richard   Email Richard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard

Absolutly beautiful and touching Tamera
Eloise
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11 posted 12-30-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Tamera, this is so beautiful.  Thank you for sharing.
Justbleu
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12 posted 01-18-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This is very beautiful....I hope you get to see her again!!!  I can sooo relate to most of this!!  Nicely done!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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13 posted 01-18-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Beautiful written !!!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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14 posted 01-18-2000 09:52 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautifully written  
Nate Dogg
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15 posted 01-19-2000 12:17 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Well-written Devina!

 Nathan
Elizabeth Santos
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16 posted 01-19-2000 12:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You have wrapped a warm blanket of love around every person who reads this poem, and each will surely shed a tear
You have written your sorrow beautifully
Liz
Meadowmuse
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17 posted 01-19-2000 12:46 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Tamera, you've taken this reader on a journey of the heart...one that ends in faith, light and promise. Thank you for the gifting this cold afternoon.

Claire
 
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