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For All Souls Sleepin On the Couch Tonite

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 12-29-1999 12:31 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt

I wont think depressing still I have fight
Yet gaiety would not fit here too well
Id like to pen a love poem tonight
But that my heart is a quivering shell

I feign sleep here alone a home once gay
Whispering poetry trickles no where
I post and pray that as all of you may
A poets haven for those who do care

I sneak a smoke and smile at that
Its beginning to shape up tonight
I found some friends you all drew me in
Whispering softly our minuscule plight

© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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since 11-09-1999
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California! Yeah! Okay, I'm


1 posted 12-29-1999 12:42 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very nice.  I like it, I like it a lot.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Nan
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2 posted 12-29-1999 01:48 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

...Hey walt.. A house with you in it HAS to be full of gaiety....
Poet deVine
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3 posted 12-29-1999 04:04 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I like this....glad to see you posting more often!  
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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4 posted 12-29-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sneakin smokes are ya? BUSTED!  hehe, hey I'd be right along side of ya doing the same thing!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
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5 posted 12-29-1999 10:42 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Not that I know about such things, but the question is... What's in the smoke to make him sooooo way out?  
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA


6 posted 12-30-1999 05:44 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

LoL, haha You were busted for sneaking smokes (psss, you didnt tell anyone I was with you did you??)  


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


7 posted 01-20-2000 01:16 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

So Echo was with you was she???? LOL!!  This was interesting....I did enjoy the read...it made me smile!!

Take Care
Bridgette
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