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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 1999-12-29 12:31 PM


I won’t think depressing still I have fight
Yet gaiety would not fit here too well
I’d like to pen a love poem tonight
But that my heart is a quivering shell

I feign sleep here alone a home once gay
Whispering poetry trickles no where
I post and pray that as all of you may
A poets haven for those who do care

I sneak a smoke and smile at that
It’s beginning to shape up tonight
I found some friends you all drew me in
Whispering softly our minuscule plight


© Copyright 1999 Walt Burns - All Rights Reserved
Astraea
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since 1999-11-09
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California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now
1 posted 1999-12-29 12:42 PM


Very nice.  I like it, I like it a lot.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."


Nan
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2 posted 1999-12-29 01:48 PM


...Hey walt.. A house with you in it HAS to be full of gaiety....
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
3 posted 1999-12-29 04:04 PM


I like this....glad to see you posting more often!  

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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4 posted 1999-12-29 10:16 PM


Sneakin smokes are ya? BUSTED!  hehe, hey I'd be right along side of ya doing the same thing!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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5 posted 1999-12-29 10:42 PM


Not that I know about such things, but the question is... What's in the smoke to make him sooooo way out?  
Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA
6 posted 1999-12-30 05:44 AM


LoL, haha You were busted for sneaking smokes (psss, you didnt tell anyone I was with you did you??)  


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
7 posted 2000-01-20 01:16 AM


So Echo was with you was she???? LOL!!  This was interesting....I did enjoy the read...it made me smile!!

Take Care
Bridgette

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