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Something beyond the pain..........

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The Jackal
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0 posted 12-28-1999 09:48 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

you have someone dont you?
everyone has someone dont they?
there is something beyond the pain
isnt there?
your not answering
am i asking the right questions
or are you giving me silent answers
to ease my mind
perhaps im not hearing you
like you need me too
or my life is over
and someone forgets to tell me
that ive been left behind to wait..

© Copyright 1999 John Dixon - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-28-1999 11:07 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh so sad.   Well written too, Jackal.

 Denise


Tamera
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2 posted 12-29-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

very sad, there is something behind the pain, I promise..it is there..
Astraea
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3 posted 12-29-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Lovely.  Just not-at-all-plainly lovely.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Meadowmuse
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4 posted 12-29-1999 02:27 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

I enjoyed reading this thought provoking piece... and no, everyone "doesn't" have someone...{sigh}
Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-29-1999 07:20 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I'll answer you when someone answers me ok?  Maybe we are just asking the wrong questions *shrugs* who knows


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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