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jaxjoy
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0 posted 12-28-1999 10:21 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jaxjoy




You are air to my fire
Water to my thirst
Breath to my life

From inside you find me
Hidden, alone
You took my hand
and helped me to see light
Like a sunrise to my darkness

You brought me to the surface
From beneath stark, icy waters
and I feel you breathe inside me
Again I live
© Copyright 1999 Jacqueline Vachier - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 12-28-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, jaxjoy! Just beautiful!

 Denise


Astraea
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2 posted 12-28-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

I can relate.  Very lovely.  

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-29-1999 01:11 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Very beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Paul Hoekman
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I feel light and warm.
              Paul
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5 posted 12-30-1999 12:40 AM       View Profile for Songbird   Email Songbird   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Songbird's Home Page   View IP for Songbird

Very lovely. Thank you for the read.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 12-30-1999 01:43 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

"You brought me to the surface
From beneath stark, icy waters
and I feel you breathe inside me
Again I live"

YES!!! What an ending. I like this...a lot!!

caroline
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7 posted 12-30-1999 08:06 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

Oh yes!!  I do like this one    Has a very buoyant quality to it, it does. You convey the journey up very well in few words. Lovely!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


U K Hero
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8 posted 12-30-1999 08:16 AM       View Profile for U K Hero   Email U K Hero   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for U K Hero

O' yes, I like your comparisions.
jaxjoy
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9 posted 12-30-1999 03:14 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

thank you all for your kind words!
Tamera
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10 posted 12-30-1999 06:06 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

I love it!!! I feel warm and fuzzy all over..what a wonderful thought, for someone to bring that out in you..life can be so good!  
 
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