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jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

0 posted 1999-12-28 10:21 PM

You are air to my fire
Water to my thirst
Breath to my life

From inside you find me
Hidden, alone
You took my hand
and helped me to see light
Like a sunrise to my darkness

You brought me to the surface
From beneath stark, icy waters
and I feel you breathe inside me
Again I live

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-12-28 10:44 PM

Beautiful, jaxjoy! Just beautiful!

Denise

Astraea
Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 378
California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now

2 posted 1999-12-28 10:48 PM

I can relate. Very lovely.

~Astraea

"Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

3 posted 1999-12-29 01:11 AM

Very beautiful!

~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Paul Hoekman
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 382
Harwinton Ct. U>S>A>

4 posted 1999-12-30 12:36 PM

I feel light and warm.
Paul

Songbird
Member Elite

since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

5 posted 1999-12-30 12:40 PM

Very lovely. Thank you for the read.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-12-30 01:43 AM

"You brought me to the surface
From beneath stark, icy waters
and I feel you breathe inside me
Again I live"

YES!!! What an ending. I like this...a lot!!

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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7 posted 1999-12-30 08:06 AM

Oh yes!! I do like this one

Has a very buoyant quality to it, it does. You convey the journey up very well in few words. Lovely!

It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain

U K Hero
Member

since 1999-08-08

Posts 266
England

8 posted 1999-12-30 08:16 AM

O' yes, I like your comparisions.

jaxjoy
Member

since 1999-12-14

Posts 112
Texas

9 posted 1999-12-30 03:14 PM

thank you all for your kind words!

Tamera
Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 121

10 posted 1999-12-30 06:06 PM

I love it!!! I feel warm and fuzzy all over..what a wonderful thought, for someone to bring that out in you..life can be so good!

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