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whiskey
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0 posted 12-28-1999 07:58 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

" Lost inside "

Outside I cry
My heart does die
Inside my cell
For you I fell
Lost to me
Inside I see
You I want
Love to taunt
Deep within
A frowning grin
No you no me
No things to be
No way to know
No words to show
Just loss of mind
In time ill find

© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 12-28-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is yet another beautiful poem!  I like it a lot!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Astraea
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2 posted 12-28-1999 08:51 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Simple, to the point, and very beautiful.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

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3 posted 12-28-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very nice, whiskey!  

 Denise


whiskey
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4 posted 12-29-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thanks to everyone  
caroline
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5 posted 12-29-1999 10:53 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

I'm trying to catch up on what I missed while I was away..and glad I found this one. Like it much, I do  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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6 posted 12-29-1999 10:17 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

Very beautiful, I enjoyed this a lot.  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha


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7 posted 12-30-1999 03:39 AM       View Profile for highwayman   Email highwayman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for highwayman

I think this is the first time I've seen this one.  Nice

 
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