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Soul on Ice : Part 1(repost)

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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 12-28-1999 06:44 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

I figured that was maybe some people were wondering what Soul on Ice: Part 1 was about. Well I reposted it for those people. I hope y'll like it. By the way, this was my first post on this board.

As I continue to stand on this ledge,
I continue to lose my edge,
with my soul
because, it has gotten out of control.
Once upon a time,
I was a guy with a stress-free mind,
but now, I lash out at people like an angry canine.
Origin: God created man and man created politics,
I decline to participate in it,
until I was orientated.
I heard 20,000 drivebies
and only 199 was lies.
No surprise, as crimes constantly rise,
thine has seen the end,
for a chance for a peaceful world to begin.
In the heat of debate,
my emotions ramble like an earthquake.
I concede to say that I will never find,
my own piece of mind,
in this crazy world, if I continue to act blind.
But in a sudden display of rage, I say: Give me 40,000 black angry role models,
take me to D.C. and I 'll throw the first freaking bottle!!
I'm sick at all the disadvantages,
I get for living in these circumstances!!
My civil rights, I sacrifice.
In the name of Jesus Christ,
they got my soul on ice.



 Nathan
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Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 12-28-1999 06:52 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great Nate

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nate Dogg
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Thank you Echo Rhayne.

 Nathan
Tamera
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3 posted 12-28-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Very powerful message...very good.  
Nate Dogg
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4 posted 12-28-1999 08:39 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Thank you Tamera and welcome to our poetry society!

 Nathan
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