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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Clandestine Moon In year one I pledged to see the moon shining proudly to bring us unity but it shivered behind clouds of winter In year next I promised again my eyes but still vexed was the moon lost in a shroud of grey haze In year last I lingered aching for the slice of moonlight that belongs only to us but the moon is yet obscured and the mist begins to rain drops fall like tears from the eyes of saints in each December's search for her She is elusive as you are from my gaze secluded behind that which I cannot reach or remove Enigmatic Mysterious Unknown © caroline 1999 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is very good, caroline! Great imagery.. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
And here we have another beautiful winner...from Mistress Best... accolades and applause, Caroline - I love it!  K...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~Carolina Moon Keep Shining~ ! Wonderful ... wonderful ... wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Beautiful and very good |
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Astraea Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 378California! Yeah! Okay, I'm done now |
Lovely! Do you need any more people to tell you that fact? ~Astraea "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness." "Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Caroline! Very lovely! Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Applauding!!! "and the mist begins to rain drops fall like tears from the eyes of saints" Excellent lines!!!! I like this a lot |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Going back up... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, this is wonderful as you are !!I love it What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Ohhh thank you...I wasn't too sure about this one. I actually wrote it on bits of note paper pulled from my daytimer while I was traveling...*LOL* You all have made my day...to know that wonderful poets like yourselves enjoyed this gives me a big smile  Severn....you crack me up girlfriend!!! It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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