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Death Of A Rose
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Death Of A Rose |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Death Of A Rose Sometimes The swirl of a brush stroke can appear to be that of a rose And YOU whose petals I can never touch whose fragrance I can never intoxicate myself with Were my rose The rose whose thorn stays embedded in my heart A constant reminder of this pain and passion My blood as red as YOU My Rose |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is very beautiful! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
This was written with pain and passion...nice job. The emotions are very crisp. I checked out your website. You should post "I Myself Believe In Rain". I thought it to be excellent  Welcome to Passions!It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate the replies. Perhaps I will post "I Myself Believe In Rain" next..thanks Caroline |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
wonderful poem, very beautiful |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wonderful poem! Denise |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very passionate indeed... and welcome to Passions jaxjoy! ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
caroline, how did you find jaxjoy's website? I would like to visit it too! |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Wonderful poem. I know what you fell. (((Hugs))) B Gravitt |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JaxJoy - Very nice, indeed. Also enjoyed your site. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Oh how I feel the emotions in this......I am left feeling so sad. Thank you it is very nice I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Awesome! Beautiful and POWERFUL! I like this much, I do, I do! |
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jaxjoy Member
since 1999-12-14
Posts 112Texas |
Thank you all for your beautiful words. I was feeling a little down this morning. Thanks for the uplifting Rosemary, if you or anyone else for that matter, would like to visit my homepage just click on the little house above this box. that will take you there Thank you all again. |
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