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Death Of A Rose

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jaxjoy
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0 posted 12-28-1999 06:43 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for jaxjoy


Death Of A Rose

Sometimes
The swirl of a brush stroke
can appear to be that of a rose
And YOU
whose petals
I can never touch
whose fragrance
I can never intoxicate myself with
Were my rose
The rose whose thorn
stays embedded in my heart
A constant reminder
of this pain and passion
My blood
as red as YOU
My Rose

© Copyright 1999 Jacqueline Vachier - All Rights Reserved
Echo Rhayne
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1 posted 12-28-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is very beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

caroline
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2 posted 12-28-1999 06:53 PM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

This was written with pain and passion...nice job. The emotions are very crisp. I checked out your website. You should post "I Myself Believe In Rain".  I thought it to be excellent    Welcome to Passions!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


jaxjoy
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3 posted 12-28-1999 07:49 PM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Thank you for your comments.  I appreciate the replies.  Perhaps I will post "I Myself Believe In Rain" next..thanks Caroline
whiskey
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4 posted 12-28-1999 07:52 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

wonderful poem, very beautiful  
Denise
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5 posted 12-28-1999 09:06 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Wonderful poem!

 Denise


Severn
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6 posted 12-29-1999 05:33 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very passionate indeed... and welcome to Passions jaxjoy!



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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7 posted 12-29-1999 06:06 AM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

caroline, how did you find jaxjoy's website? I would like to visit it too!
Betty Gravitt
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8 posted 12-29-1999 06:47 AM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Wonderful poem. I know what you fell.
(((Hugs)))


 B Gravitt


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9 posted 12-29-1999 07:12 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JaxJoy -
Very nice, indeed.
Also enjoyed your site.
~*Marge*~


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First__Knight
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10 posted 12-29-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Oh how I feel the emotions in this......I am left feeling so sad.  Thank you it is very nice  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

Christopher
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11 posted 12-29-1999 07:49 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Awesome!
Beautiful and POWERFUL!
I like this much, I do, I do!
jaxjoy
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12 posted 12-29-1999 07:58 AM       View Profile for jaxjoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jaxjoy

Thank you all for your beautiful words.  I was feeling a little down this morning.  Thanks for the uplifting   Rosemary, if you or anyone else for that matter, would like to visit my homepage just click on the little house above this box. that will take you there    Thank you all again.
 
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