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Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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0 posted 1999-12-28 04:40 PM



my world is crashing
in on me
the real and the abstract
clawing and tearing
no longer meshing
with an uneasy peace
full fledged war has been declared,
leaving me
spinning and toppling
my brain straining
for forgetfulness
so I won't remember the pain
and I won't have to deal with
all the very stupid
things I did for just today
that will affect all
tomorrows to come




 remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart



© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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since 1999-06-07
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Ohio
1 posted 1999-12-28 04:56 PM


A familiar war to be sure!  I've learned there's no point in dwelling on mistakes or misfortunes.  It's a terrible waste of time.

I do however, wish you well...if this indeed is how you're feeling at the moment.  Smile!  It takes only a moment and makes you feel so much better!!  

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
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Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-28 05:49 PM


I must agree and 'acho' Sally's wrds as well!
*hugs*

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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3 posted 1999-12-28 06:04 PM


Wow - another powerful one...



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara

Iloveit
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4 posted 1999-12-28 06:48 PM


it would take a lot for me to smile at this moment....but....thanks I know it won't last forever....
Denise
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5 posted 1999-12-28 09:51 PM


A very powerful, painful poem. I've been there. (do you know my ex?...hehehe...sorry, it's been so long I can laugh about it now. I truly feel for you. I hope things get better real soon!

 Denise



Balladeer
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6 posted 1999-12-28 10:24 PM


I'm sorry, ilovit. A person as nice as you should be allowed to be happy........hang in there, ok?
RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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7 posted 1999-12-29 12:29 PM


Iloveit: Hmmmmm, what's going on?  But I'm sure whatever it is, it's right, right for you...

Husg sweetheart

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.


Iloveit
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8 posted 1999-12-29 11:32 AM


thanks all, hugs back
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
9 posted 1999-12-29 11:34 AM


Forgive, but never forget. Learn, and it was not in vain! Hang in there!
Tamera
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since 1999-12-28
Posts 121

10 posted 1999-12-29 01:57 PM


I give you hugs and whatever strength I can muster...my thoughts are with you as you struggle through some of lifes difficulties. However, reach inside and smile..

 

RSEvans
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since 1999-10-23
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Tulsa, OK, USA
11 posted 1999-12-29 02:44 PM


****POUNCE*****  Sowwy...looked like you needed it...hUGS  
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
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NM
12 posted 1999-12-29 02:52 PM


lol@pounce...and you are right I did, first time I smiled in a couple of days...thanks
RSEvans
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Tulsa, OK, USA
13 posted 1999-12-29 02:55 PM


anytime
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