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the war of worlds

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Iloveit
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0 posted 12-28-1999 04:40 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Iloveit


my world is crashing
in on me
the real and the abstract
clawing and tearing
no longer meshing
with an uneasy peace
full fledged war has been declared,
leaving me
spinning and toppling
my brain straining
for forgetfulness
so I won't remember the pain
and I won't have to deal with
all the very stupid
things I did for just today
that will affect all
tomorrows to come




 remember this...nobody has an unbreakable heart


© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Sally S.
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1 posted 12-28-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

A familiar war to be sure!  I've learned there's no point in dwelling on mistakes or misfortunes.  It's a terrible waste of time.

I do however, wish you well...if this indeed is how you're feeling at the moment.  Smile!  It takes only a moment and makes you feel so much better!!  
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 12-28-1999 05:49 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I must agree and 'acho' Sally's wrds as well!
*hugs*

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Severn
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3 posted 12-28-1999 06:04 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Wow - another powerful one...



 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
Iloveit
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4 posted 12-28-1999 06:48 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

it would take a lot for me to smile at this moment....but....thanks I know it won't last forever....
Denise
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5 posted 12-28-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A very powerful, painful poem. I've been there. (do you know my ex?...hehehe...sorry, it's been so long I can laugh about it now. I truly feel for you. I hope things get better real soon!

 Denise


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6 posted 12-28-1999 10:24 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

I'm sorry, ilovit. A person as nice as you should be allowed to be happy........hang in there, ok?
RainbowGirl
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7 posted 12-29-1999 12:29 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: Hmmmmm, what's going on?  But I'm sure whatever it is, it's right, right for you...

Husg sweetheart

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

Iloveit
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8 posted 12-29-1999 11:32 AM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

thanks all, hugs back
Christopher
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9 posted 12-29-1999 11:34 AM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Forgive, but never forget. Learn, and it was not in vain! Hang in there!
Tamera
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10 posted 12-29-1999 01:57 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

I give you hugs and whatever strength I can muster...my thoughts are with you as you struggle through some of lifes difficulties. However, reach inside and smile..

 
RSEvans
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11 posted 12-29-1999 02:44 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

****POUNCE*****  Sowwy...looked like you needed it...hUGS  
Iloveit
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12 posted 12-29-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

lol@pounce...and you are right I did, first time I smiled in a couple of days...thanks
RSEvans
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13 posted 12-29-1999 02:55 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

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