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You (Reflections) |
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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
It's not what you are but all that you do It's reflections you see looking at you It's not what you say, it's words left unsaid It's memories you leave after you're dead It's doing all you can with all you are It's all those you touch and those that you scar It's the need to move on, the power of flight It's the whispers you scream deep in the nite It's the knowledge of then used here and now It's the seeds you've sown in the dirt you plow It's the power to dream, the will to fall It's the time of your life, go, have a ball Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a really good piece of work... Don't be such a stranger around these parts....  |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
hey, this is a poem with an attitude! And I like it. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Wonderful thoughts here HM, very true as well! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a wonderful poem, I enjoyed this very much! Denise |
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