Wow, what a beautifully written poem, it took my breath away. Usually I am not fond of poems like this, but, this one is just perfect and flows so well. Your use of imagery shines, your words are magical.
I love this poem!! The first verse sets the tone very well.
My favourite lines:
"and it bollows o'er the sea.
it's sails are full of memory gusts"
"it goes beyond the albatross.
to weld two souls as one."
This is the first poem that I had ever read by you, and I must say I am very impressed. I look forward to more poetry by you.
I have poems in critical analysis and in dark passions, feel free to reply to my poems. Thanks!
* Melissa Honeybee *