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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 1999-12-28 12:22 PM


Our love just began,
As the sky so high ,
Without an ending in our story,
Love is just a crazy,
Let our love be just the same,
With your name,
In my heart,
Our love story just begin,
Don't let love end
With the happy life we 've
It's just the beginning,


[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 12-28-1999).]

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Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
1 posted 1999-12-28 04:58 PM


I like this...kind of like a to be continued poem

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


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