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My Heart Sings

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Dark Angel
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0 posted 12-28-1999 07:42 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel


      My Heart Sings.

As the Silver moon sparkles
High up in the dark velvet sky
Your eyes shimmer like bubbles
Chasing ghostly butterflies nearby

Your Aura aglow, my candlelight
Your smile as pretty as fireflies
I sigh, at such a mystical sight
You're the rainbow in my dark skies

You're the wonder of my world
Whether it's real or fantasy
All of my senses unfurled
I am lost within your beauty

My heart sings when I'm with you
Let's dance forever, never apart
Like tiny droplets of the morning dew
Falling, gently upon my heart.


         Dark Angel
        


 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Sven
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1 posted 12-28-1999 07:47 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

This is beautiful Dark Angel. . .

It flows nicely, you have wonderful imagery. . . and, I just like it!

The "Silver moon" and "your aura, my candlelight". . . very good. . .



 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Dark Angel
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2 posted 12-28-1999 08:01 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Sven, Thank you my friend.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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3 posted 12-28-1999 08:08 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is beautiful , really sets a picture in my mind,  very good

Moonshine
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4 posted 12-28-1999 08:56 AM       View Profile for Moonshine   Email Moonshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Moonshine's Home Page   View IP for Moonshine

Wow DA - this is truly beautiful hon - well done!

Huggs.......
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 12-28-1999 10:11 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very beautiful DA...that passionate poet in you shines very clear in this one  
caroline
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6 posted 12-28-1999 10:57 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

DA, this is simply superb..."your aura, my candlelight..."  Oh, what a lovely line that is    A really beautiful piece of work here, my friend!

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain


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7 posted 12-28-1999 10:59 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

A lovely poem! Visually elegant! I like this one!  
Meadowmuse
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8 posted 12-28-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Your natural and earthen elements bring this piece to life...rhythmically resonant, pleasure to read.  
RSEvans
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9 posted 12-28-1999 11:16 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

"like tiny droplets of morning dew falling on my heart"...beautiful
Echo Rhayne
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10 posted 12-28-1999 04:35 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is beautiful!  I especially liked the last stanza!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Severn
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11 posted 12-28-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very dreamy, very good...  K
Dark Angel
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Thank you ALL so very much for your kind and lovely comments, I do appreciate them all.  
It makes me happy to know you enjoyed it.  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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13 posted 12-28-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very beautiful, Dark Angel! So lovely!

 Denise


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14 posted 12-29-1999 12:30 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

This is so precious, it's gorgeous.

HUGS

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.

WhtDove
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Hey DA!  Love how you describe this with the words you've used here. Very well done my friend!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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Lovely.  Truly lovely.  I liked it.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Dark Angel
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17 posted 12-29-1999 02:19 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Denise, thank you so much  
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RG, thank you Hon  
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WhtDove Angel, thanks so much, glad you liked it
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Astraea, Thank You!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


JennyLee
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18 posted 01-04-2000 12:52 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Most excellent Dark Angel...
I enjoyed this one very much  


Jenny Lee


 Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.

Dark Angel
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19 posted 01-04-2000 04:22 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Jenny Lee, thanks so much my friend  
havent seen you around, where ya been ?

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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