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" Confusion  "

Do you know how pale
Worhtless and feelful in a strange world
Unannounced, Unexplained for
Scared of over friendly guests you've
Brought to me

Death makes angels of us all
And forgives you for your sins
Where we have had lives
I will not go, I will not go down that road
Turn back into a room of death
You are here too

© Copyright 1999 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
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Welcome to passions  
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2 posted 12-28-1999 11:26 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! I look forward to reading more from you!  
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WoW Whiskey, were you reading my mind when you wrote this?  Very deep and powerful word here.  Great job!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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hey Whiskey, this is Great!! looking forward to more. Welcome!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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Thank you for all your welcomes, and replies
Everyone is so nice here.  
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6 posted 12-29-1999 05:39 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Whiskey, I respond to this deeply - well done!



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Here is an oldy but a goody!
How've you been?
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Thanks Paul , I have been fine   just havent had alot of time to get online
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