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Showers of Love

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First__Knight
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0 posted 12-28-1999 04:07 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight


Showers of Love
~First Knight~


Be still my sweet don't fight it,
Sprinkled with my love.
Like morning dew on flowers.
Showered from above.

Sparkles from the water,
On each and everyone.
Mixed with many colors.
The show has just begun.

Sunrise comes so early,
Bringing light to all that's here.
Another sky filled glory,  
My true love don't you fear.

I will never leave you,  
I am standing by your side.
Your tree of life my darling.
My branches stretched out wide.

Shade for you to rest,
A shelter from this heat.
My strength to protect you,
My gift is now complete.

So......

Be still my sweet don't fight it,
Sprinkled with my love.
Like morning dew on flowers.
Showered from above.




 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

© Copyright 1999 First__Knight - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 12-28-1999 05:24 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

*sigh* this is beautiful first_knight!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Severn
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2 posted 12-28-1999 05:45 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Beautiful...
First__Knight
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3 posted 12-28-1999 07:27 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Why thank you Dark Angel and Severn  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 12-28-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Makes me want to dance in the rain without an umbrella!
Beautiful, it is
Liz
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5 posted 12-28-1999 08:41 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

This brought a smile to my face with it's beautiful sentiment. I do hope she see's the sincerity of your words. You are an extremely gifted writer and I am enjoying your wonderful poems.
Pepper
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6 posted 12-28-1999 09:27 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Very beautiful FK.....I do enjoy your work so......

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


hoot_owl_rn
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7 posted 12-28-1999 09:56 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

David...I sit here with tears in my eyes after reading this. I know I haven't been easy to deal with the past two days and I'm sorry for that. Please be patient with me...can I use the old saying "God isn't finished with me yet"?
Thank you so much for this one...it truly speaks to this heart  
whiskey
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8 posted 12-28-1999 10:01 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Beautiful , I liked it alot  
Meadowmuse
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Showering poetic adoration seems to be a natural inclination for your heart's calling.  Well done, indeed.
Echo Rhayne
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10 posted 12-28-1999 04:33 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is absolutely beautiful =o)


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Denise
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11 posted 12-28-1999 07:35 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, First Knight!

 Denise


First__Knight
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12 posted 12-28-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

OH my the response has over joyed this simple soul...My thanks to each of you I could never repaid each of you for your kind and gentle words. But I will always try  

Ruth ....if God has yet to finish..I can't wait to see the end result  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.



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Astraea
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13 posted 12-28-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Astraea   Email Astraea   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Astraea

Very lovely.  I love these types of poems.  Especially when talented people write them.

~Astraea

 "Sometimes stars can only be seen in darkness."

"Sorrow's crown of sorrow is remembering happier things."

Tamera
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14 posted 12-28-1999 10:16 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

oh, to have a man write those words to me, I am not sure what i would do! You took my breath away...
First__Knight
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15 posted 12-28-1999 11:18 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Astraea and Tamera And welcome to passions.  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

 
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