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devina
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0 posted 12-28-1999 02:51 AM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for devina

I dream of a winter morning,
when I wake up next to you.
With your loving arms around me,
there's nothing I'd rather do.

I watch you sleep for awhile,
as I gently touch your face.
You awaken with a smile,
and stretch with innocent grace.

You whisper that you love me,
and once again I'm by your side.
I say I love you too-
For you alone are my whole life.
© Copyright 1999 Tanya Nicole Bustamante - All Rights Reserved
First__Knight
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1 posted 12-28-1999 03:48 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Loving poem......He is lucky that you could share such feelings with him  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

Severn
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2 posted 12-28-1999 05:57 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

This is so sweet and tender...
One thought...it isn't always safe to have someone as your whole life...

K



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Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-28-1999 04:23 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is beautiful, very heartfelt.  

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Denise
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4 posted 12-28-1999 07:33 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely poem, devina! And lovely pic!

 Denise


devina
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5 posted 12-28-1999 08:30 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

FK- Thanks so much for your thoughts!

Severn- This is one of my older poems, dedicated to my ex fiance, and believe me hun, your words hold much truth.

Echo- Thank you hun, and remember, you can e-mail me anytime.((HUGS))

Dsnyder- Why thank you for the compliment!  It's still taking some getting use to seeing everyone for the first time, much love to you!
Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 01-15-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Quite lovely, I must agree.  

 ~*~ ^i^ ~*~ Love is such a lonely art, and death is but a taste. Minds are merely instruments that often go to waste! ~*~ ^i^ ~*~


amber
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8 posted 01-15-2000 04:41 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

hey sister no more getting fiesty about my slow replies okay, you know that i have been busy hun!!!!jsut kidding well i liked your poem, even though i think that we have already read every poem of each others since we were children, but nonetheless, i read but i dont reply to you, someitmes.....right away..... I guess I am jsut to busy with ELLIS as you would say yourself right. Well your wrong you know that i love you. ( Amber smiles) oh yah how did you like that. well i guess i jsut wanted to say that you know that even through all of the hard times, i know that he still loves you, i can see it in his eyes, wehn he looks at you, i can hear it in his voice when he talks about you. and i know that you love him to and no matter what you say, if it could be right at the moment , you would do anything to be in his armas agian until this day. Im not stupid i know you well enough SO just remember that even if now isnt the time for you, eventually if your love is ment to be, you will be together and i believe that. I love you.
     YOUR SIStER
HelmutB
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9 posted 01-15-2000 08:37 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

Nice, beautiful and short, but say's it all
There is just one tiny thing and it is so small
Don't want to repeat it but Severn said it all
Very good the poem indeed
Make's me getting a tissue to hide the weep  




 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

HelmutB
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10 posted 01-15-2000 08:43 AM       View Profile for HelmutB   Email HelmutB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit HelmutB's Home Page   View IP for HelmutB

One thing I forgot to say
U 2 sure have your way
U know of whom i speak with this
Sister love is such a bliss
Well brother too I guess
But that would be a bless  
It's nice to see this  


 The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.

whiskey
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11 posted 01-15-2000 10:40 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

This is sweet , Very loving  
Wishing you all the best
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