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Alwye
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In the space between moments

0 posted 1999-12-28 12:03 PM


Your spirit sweeps over me,
Sunshine upon my darkened road.
Painted wisteria vines I see,
And hear whispers of stories untold.

Golden flecks shower about,
And rest within your eyes.
I am entranced without a doubt,
For this love I'd gladly die.

In your tears darkness falls,
Tearing my tender soul apart.
All I want is to destroy the walls,
And take your pain into my heart.

When you smile I feel complete,
As if the whole world is right.
When you touch me I feel the heat,
Of passion rising in the night.

You possess me body and soul,
And my love is yours forever.
If there's one thing I truly know,
It's that we will be always together.




 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha



© Copyright 1999 Krista Botterill - All Rights Reserved
devina
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Cali
1 posted 1999-12-28 03:00 AM


Beautiful poem, keep your thoughts of love high for so many of us give up hope before the time is right.
Dark Angel
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2 posted 1999-12-28 05:27 AM


WOW!!! I love this, beautiful!!

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Severn
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3 posted 1999-12-28 05:44 AM


This is precious - a beautiful work.  
Echo Rhayne
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4 posted 1999-12-28 04:19 PM


Very beautiful!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Dark Angel
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5 posted 1999-12-28 05:21 PM


Alwye, I just read this beautiful piece again and again it touches me, sending back up to the top, this can't be missed.

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Nan
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6 posted 1999-12-28 05:34 PM


...yep - my gal Alwye... still turning out great stuff...
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-12-28 05:39 PM


Alwye,
Good job your talent shows.

caroline
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8 posted 1999-12-28 06:14 PM


Love this Alwye...  

 It's not the love you fear, but the fall from the height~Edwin McCain



Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 1999-12-28 09:47 PM


Wow, thank you all very much!  

 *Krista Knutson*

~*Like a lion, without fear of the howling pack,
Like a gust of wind, ne'er trapped in a snare,
Like a lotus blossom, ne'er sprinkled by water,
Let me, like a unicorn, in solitude roam.*~ Hymn Of Buddha



Dusk Treader
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10 posted 1999-12-28 10:08 PM


Captivating poem, Krista.  I'm sure this one hit the intended mark   Another wonderful piece.

 In flames I shall not be consumed, but reborn.


Tamera
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11 posted 1999-12-28 10:23 PM


You do hold love in high regards, amazing..wonderful work!  
Denise
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12 posted 1999-12-28 11:05 PM


Beautiful, Krista!  

 Denise



Elizabeth Santos
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13 posted 1999-12-28 11:10 PM


Congratulations, well written!
Liz

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14 posted 1999-12-28 11:56 PM


Such aa romantic you are....and you do it so well!
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