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Vintage poem of mine
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
***written this March-my 1st poem ever here-posted in the OLD forums*** Sometimes when you love someone it hurts you real bad Along with friendship come the good times and also come the sad There are things that have to happen that affect you and your friend And there's nothing you can do about it except wait for the end. You wish that you could just reach out and take away the pain But from all the grief and sorrow there is something you can gain. Remember that the book of life never states things will be fair And sometimes all that you can do is show your friend you care. These situations teach you the real meaning of strife And the lessons you will learn from them will last you all your life. Elizabeth < !signature--> Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Elizabeth, Were you reading my diary? This is good Love ya, Liz |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Of course not, Liz, I do have standards!  Glad you liked it.Love ya, Elizabeth Nail to the mast her holy flag, Set every threadbare sail- And give her to the god of storms, The lightning and the gale! -Oliver Wendell Holmes |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Amen! Oh how true! Wonderful poem, Elizabeth! Denise |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Thank you, dear Denise! Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth, Elizabeth, Elizabeth ... this is so great ... I love poems about friendship and friendships that last for life. Wonderful ... just wonderful ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth
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So do I, Marge. And thanks. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Elizabeth this is wise and wonderful. In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Elizabeth
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What a nice thing to say, Martie! Thank you very very much. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Elizabeth this is just wonderful. Thanks for shareing. B Gravitt |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Glad to, Betty. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Elizabeth, everything you write is vintage in my book. Well done again. |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Like a fine Chardonay....it only improves with age. |
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Richard Junior Member
since 1999-12-27
Posts 35California |
So true and meaningful, Elizabeth, thoroughly enjoyed it. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Wonderful! Wonderful! Simply wonderful! Can you tell how much I liked this one Elizabeth?!  A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is great. The rhyme and the subject of it both are just great! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Balladeer-what a nice thing to say! Gunslinger-thanks, and that's a pretty cool simile. Richard-thank you very much! Pepper-I could tell! Echo-glad you liked it! Thanks again all you guys. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Elizabeth: To still reach out when love is lost is the best kind of love... HUGS Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Very wise words |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Wewll done and very true. *L* Sy |
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Elizabeth
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since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Rainbow-exactly! I agree completely. Hoot and Sy-thank you both E. "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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