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Georgia
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0 posted 12-27-1999 02:25 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

One last moment,
A precious breath,
The deepest sigh,
One last request-
Love me forever
And never forget
Our love was real
Though we met
On the net!
© Copyright 1999 Georgia - All Rights Reserved
Jewl_24_1999
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since 10-24-1999
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1 posted 12-27-1999 03:33 PM       View Profile for Jewl_24_1999   Email Jewl_24_1999   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Jewl_24_1999

Well Georgia, I never posted a poem in passions before, but I enjoy coming here and reading the wonderful works of art that these poets create.  They challenge my mind, and bring feelings alive.  You came to the perfect place to improve on your poetry.  I suggest the Poetry workshops.


[This message has been edited by Jewl_24_1999 (edited 12-27-1999).]
Local Rebel
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since 12-21-1999
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2 posted 12-27-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for Local Rebel   Email Local Rebel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Local Rebel

And for all of us to enjoy!  Concise.  Your emotion is well known and you evoke response.

Bravo!

 How much more grievous are the consequences of anger than the causes of it. -Marcus Aurelius
Georgia
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since 12-22-1999
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3 posted 12-27-1999 04:48 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

jewl, i thank you for your concern over my poetic prwess..will definitely look into some more schooling..thanks for reading the poem..love ya
Georgia
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4 posted 12-27-1999 04:51 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

Rebel,
i thank you so much for your review of my poem..came from my heart and my experience..
Beri
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since 11-25-1999
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5 posted 12-27-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Beri   Email Beri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beri

Georgie, you did a wonderful job with such a short piece, it is so sweet and so complete.  Lovely...  

 If you love something, set it free, if it comes back to you, its meant to be...

Betty Gravitt
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6 posted 12-27-1999 05:12 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Georgia, I like the peice.

 B Gravitt


Echo Rhayne
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7 posted 12-27-1999 05:29 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Short, sweet and straight to the point!  Very well done!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nan
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8 posted 12-27-1999 05:36 PM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Welcome to Passions, Georgia.... Nice to have you here....
Richard
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since 12-27-1999
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9 posted 12-27-1999 08:06 PM       View Profile for Richard   Email Richard   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard

very well done, Georgia. Short but tender.
Denise
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10 posted 12-27-1999 08:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Georgia! Beautiful and heartfelt little poem!  

 Denise


Marge Tindal
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11 posted 12-27-1999 08:21 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Georgia -
This poem is PERFECT just PERFECT !
You captured it all !
Wonderful, my dear.
WELCOME WITH OPEN ARMS FROM A 'FELLOW-POET'  
Hope to see many more from your poetic pen.
Love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
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12 posted 12-27-1999 08:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Welcome to Passions, and your first post is a passionate poem!
Liz
Eloise
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13 posted 12-28-1999 01:02 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Very sweet poem Georgia.  Welcome to Passions. I'm sure you will enjoy your stay here.
Severn
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14 posted 12-28-1999 05:49 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Lovely! And welcome...

    

 ...I am not a painter, I am a poet... F. O'Hara
Georgia
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since 12-22-1999
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15 posted 12-28-1999 04:56 PM       View Profile for Georgia   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Georgia

i would like to thank you, one and all for your kind words and encouragement ...you are all  very special people ..thank you so much for  allowing me to come to passions!
 
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