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Strings of my heart

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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 12-27-1999 08:00 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin


        Strings of my heart

She visits me like mountain streams,
Meanders through my valleys dreams.
Bringing blooms of unconvention.
From wells of new dimension.

She babbles over aged rocks.
Leads me to the green shamrocks.
Sings to me in lovers call,
Until the day begins to fall.

She uses the wind to gain her goal
And whispers words into my soul.
She takes my hand in warm embrace
Brushes the breeze about my face.

She talks with me throughout the night.
She lights the dark with angels light.
Plucks the strings my heart knows well,
With the rings of forevers bell.

I know not how she came to be.
But thank you lord, her finding me.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 12-27-1999 08:06 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Seymour -
How very lovely.
Poet and poetess complement
each other with inspiration
that spews forth beautiful verse
that we all can enjoy.
I, too, am thankful for you both.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-27-1999 08:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

He came to me in words of song
And would my soul just dance along
For never had I seen such light
To brighten up my darkest night
Then teach the pupil of his eye
To see what it would long deny
Til finally he lifted quill
To write this verse my heart to thrill
And now it is my teary eye
That must adjust to brighter sky
Thank you,Sy
Love ya'
Liz
Nan
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3 posted 12-27-1999 08:40 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

You guys make me want to go write some more poetry...
WhtDove
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4 posted 12-27-1999 08:43 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Seymour this flowed like a gentle stream. Magnificant!!!  Gentle and calming and wonderful!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Echo Rhayne
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5 posted 12-27-1999 09:06 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 12-27-1999 11:03 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Marge,
You are an apple of my eye
A delicious one I sigh. *L*
Elizabeth,
The sands of poetry inflict your eye
But it washes out with just a sigh.
Love ya,
Sy
Nan,
I sent nightengales just yesterday
you should be in a poetic way. *L* Sy
WhtDove,
The mellifluous of your remark
Has lit a candle in my dark. *L*
Echo,
Beauty see beauty, thank you.
Betty Gravitt
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7 posted 12-27-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Seymour, such beautiful words had to come from a beautiful soul. I love it.




 B Gravitt


JOY 14
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8 posted 12-27-1999 03:09 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Just had to tell you what a perfect title this is to fit this poem. "Strings of my Heart"
  And like everyone else, I'll agree this was very beautiful.

 JOY

Pepper
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9 posted 12-27-1999 05:24 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Sy, I think this to be my very favorite of your works.
This is so special....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


Nate Dogg
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10 posted 12-27-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Beautiful piece Seymour! And very abstract too!

 Nathan
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 12-27-1999 08:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Sy,
I agree with Pepper
Liz
Denise
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12 posted 12-27-1999 08:26 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Well, you've taken by breath away! Lovely, Sy!  

 Denise


Martie
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13 posted 12-27-1999 08:29 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

A soul that's open
hears the song
of mountain stream
and sings along,
a rhythm born
of treasured flow
that sets this poet's
heart a glow

Beautiful Sy!

 In the dew of little things,
the heart finds its morning
and is refreshed.
(ee cummings)
Elizabeth
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14 posted 12-27-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Beautiful-both of you.

Elizabeth

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Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York."


Severn
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15 posted 12-28-1999 06:19 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

You both dance through poetry.

Sy - this is exquisite - again!!!

Liz - great rejoinder.

K
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16 posted 12-28-1999 07:51 AM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Sy,
    you also continue to amaze me with the depth of your gift. . . this is wonderful. . . this flows like the river that it describes. . . beautiful words, my friend. . .

 That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

whiskey
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17 posted 12-28-1999 09:31 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Very beautiful, your very good

Seymour Tabin
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18 posted 12-28-1999 12:15 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Betty,
Thank you for the love it.
Joy,
Thank you for the very beautiful.
Pepper,
Thanks for that special.
Nate,
Thanks for the beautiful and abstract.
Denise,
Thanks for the breath away.
Martie,
Loved your little poem.
Liz,
Thank you.
Severn,
We both thank you *L* Sy
Sven,
Thank you so much sven.
Wiskey,
Well I could use a shot, thank you so much.
Alison
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19 posted 03-26-2011 01:52 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

Some poetry touches the heart just a bit more than others do.  This is that poem for me.

Alison
 
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