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Strings of my heart
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Strings of my heart |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Strings of my heart She visits me like mountain streams, Meanders through my valleys dreams. Bringing blooms of unconvention. From wells of new dimension. She babbles over aged rocks. Leads me to the green shamrocks. Sings to me in lovers call, Until the day begins to fall. She uses the wind to gain her goal And whispers words into my soul. She takes my hand in warm embrace Brushes the breeze about my face. She talks with me throughout the night. She lights the dark with angels light. Plucks the strings my heart knows well, With the rings of forevers bell. I know not how she came to be. But thank you lord, her finding me. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour - How very lovely. Poet and poetess complement each other with inspiration that spews forth beautiful verse that we all can enjoy. I, too, am thankful for you both. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
He came to me in words of song And would my soul just dance along For never had I seen such light To brighten up my darkest night Then teach the pupil of his eye To see what it would long deny Til finally he lifted quill To write this verse my heart to thrill And now it is my teary eye That must adjust to brighter sky Thank you,Sy Love ya' Liz |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You guys make me want to go write some more poetry...  |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Seymour this flowed like a gentle stream. Magnificant!!! Gentle and calming and wonderful! <*\\\>< Where there is faith, there is love. Where there is love, there is peace. Where there is peace, there is GOD. Where there is GOD, there is no need. Hallmark |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful!! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, You are an apple of my eye A delicious one I sigh. *L* Elizabeth, The sands of poetry inflict your eye But it washes out with just a sigh. Love ya, Sy Nan, I sent nightengales just yesterday you should be in a poetic way. *L* Sy WhtDove, The mellifluous of your remark Has lit a candle in my dark. *L* Echo, Beauty see beauty, thank you. |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Seymour, such beautiful words had to come from a beautiful soul. I love it. B Gravitt |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
Just had to tell you what a perfect title this is to fit this poem. "Strings of my Heart" And like everyone else, I'll agree this was very beautiful. JOY |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Sy, I think this to be my very favorite of your works. This is so special.... A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful piece Seymour! And very abstract too! Nathan |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, I agree with Pepper Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Well, you've taken by breath away! Lovely, Sy! Denise |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
A soul that's open hears the song of mountain stream and sings along, a rhythm born of treasured flow that sets this poet's heart a glow Beautiful Sy! In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Beautiful-both of you. Elizabeth "Boys and girls together, me and Mamie O'Rourke Tripped the light fantastic on the sidewalks of New York." |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
You both dance through poetry. Sy - this is exquisite - again!!! Liz - great rejoinder. K |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sy, you also continue to amaze me with the depth of your gift. . . this is wonderful. . . this flows like the river that it describes. . . beautiful words, my friend. . . That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very beautiful, your very good |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Betty, Thank you for the love it. Joy, Thank you for the very beautiful. Pepper, Thanks for that special. Nate, Thanks for the beautiful and abstract. Denise, Thanks for the breath away. Martie, Loved your little poem. Liz, Thank you. Severn, We both thank you *L* Sy Sven, Thank you so much sven. Wiskey, Well I could use a shot, thank you so much. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Some poetry touches the heart just a bit more than others do. This is that poem for me. Alison |
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