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Brothers

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Jim Hastings
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0 posted 12-27-1999 01:42 AM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings


Brothers

Two brothers born as one,
Shall be together till all is done.
One of light and one of dark,
Both of them shall play thier part.

Strong of arms and pure of heart,
He has been this way right from the start.

Sharp of mind and unmatched in magic,
Tis said his life shall be tragic.

Both devoted to thier art,
Nothing can ever tear them apart.
One will always forgive the other,
For no more reason than he is his brother.
The other will never forgive a wrong,
Biding his time till he is strong.

Made from the same mold,
Yet different in ways untold.
Child of darkness, child of light.
Only together can they make things right.


 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?

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Lukia
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1 posted 12-27-1999 01:59 AM       View Profile for Lukia   Email Lukia   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Lukia

This is a very beautiful poem. It was very mysterious and I like it a lot.
Jim Hastings
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2 posted 12-27-1999 02:54 AM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings

Thank you Lukia, and welcome to passions.  
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-27-1999 05:19 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Jim this is great!!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Nan
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4 posted 12-27-1999 07:11 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Sounds pretty symbiotic.... too bad about the dark side, though....
WhtDove
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5 posted 12-27-1999 08:59 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Wonderful poem! Sounds like Cain and Abel...or Goofus and Gallant.
May the light continue in it and keep forgiving!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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Worth another time up top.
Toerag
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Way ta go Jimbo.....Very good idea, well written....Lykt'it!
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 01-28-2000 10:06 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Jim,
Interesting, enjoyed the read.
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