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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
What a beautiful sentiment! The last lines were so...sweet (for lack of a better word)!!! Well done, David. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is lovely, indeed Enjoyed reading it Liz |
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neokano New Member
since 1999-12-22
Posts 5 |
souds like a fairy tell. I only pray that I will live it some day. very well. thank you for your writing |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
My heart is held within your love. Within your dreams, I rise above. I long to have you here with me. Within your arms I'd like to be. Time and space they are no more. My heart waits like an open door. Take my hand and lead the way. Here with me, won't you please stay. High as a mountain and just as wide, Deep as the ocean, rhymithic like the tide, Love like no other you have known From me, to you, it will be shown. I'll give you all I have to give. Within my heart, you'll always live. Beautiful David, what more can I say  |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Deep in your heart I will always live, Feeding from your love that you do give. Spending nights and days living deep inside, This is what I want, my loving guide. No matter where you are, no matter what you do. I will always be there, showing my love to you.< !signature--> I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having love will last forever. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Beautiful F.K ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Oh yes....another beautiful and romantic piece... ....I enjoyed this much FK.....A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! Shannon |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Sally and Elizabeth Neokano can't figure out if I am dreaming...hehe Ruth.....Well you know Echo thank you and I like your signature. Pepper Thank you but I think romance slips from me sometimes < !signature-->I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. [This message has been edited by First__Knight (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sounds like somebody's in love! Beautiful, First Knight! And yours too, Ruth! Denise |
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Betty Gravitt Member
since 1999-09-11
Posts 222Georgia United States |
Sounds like someone has found that special one we all look for. Wonderful First_ Knight. Thank you. B Gravitt |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
First, Good job enjoyed the read. |
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First__Knight Senior Member
since 1999-11-08
Posts 678 |
Thank you Denise and Betty....I only reach and in time maybe she will decide to let me fully hold her hand. Thank you Seymour I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh, this is beautiful!!! Ain't love grand *sigh* loved it FK and I loved yours too, Ruth  What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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