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First__Knight
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0 posted 12-27-1999 12:17 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for First__Knight

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Sally S.
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1 posted 12-27-1999 12:24 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

What a beautiful sentiment!  The last lines were so...sweet (for lack of a better word)!!! Well done, David.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 12-27-1999 12:44 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

This is lovely, indeed
Enjoyed reading it
Liz
neokano
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3 posted 12-27-1999 12:45 AM       View Profile for neokano   Email neokano   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for neokano

souds like a fairy tell. I only pray that I will live it some day. very well. thank you for your writing
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 12-27-1999 02:10 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

My heart is held within your love.
Within your dreams, I rise above.
I long to have you here with me.
Within your arms I'd like to be.

Time and space they are no more.
My heart waits like an open door.
Take my hand and lead the way.
Here with me, won't you please stay.

High as a mountain and just as wide,
Deep as the ocean, rhymithic like the tide,
Love like no other you have known
From me, to you, it will be shown.


I'll give you all I have to give.
Within my heart, you'll always live.


Beautiful David, what more can I say  
First__Knight
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5 posted 12-27-1999 04:05 AM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Deep in your heart I will always live,
Feeding from your love that you do give.
Spending nights and days living deep inside,
This is what I want, my loving guide.

No matter where you are, no matter what you do.
I will always be there, showing my love to you.

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having love will last forever.



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Echo Rhayne
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6 posted 12-27-1999 05:22 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Beautiful F.K


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Pepper
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7 posted 12-27-1999 09:45 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Oh yes....another beautiful and romantic piece... ....I enjoyed this much FK.....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon


First__Knight
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8 posted 12-27-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Sally and Elizabeth
Neokano can't figure out if I am dreaming...hehe

Ruth.....Well you know  

Echo thank you and I like your signature.

Pepper Thank you but I think romance slips from me sometimes  

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.



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Denise
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9 posted 12-27-1999 09:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sounds like somebody's in love! Beautiful, First Knight! And yours too, Ruth!

 Denise


Betty Gravitt
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10 posted 12-27-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

Sounds like someone has found that special one we all look for. Wonderful First_ Knight. Thank you.

 B Gravitt


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 12-27-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

First,
Good job enjoyed the read.
First__Knight
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12 posted 12-27-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for First__Knight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for First__Knight

Thank you Denise and Betty....I only reach and in time maybe she will decide to let me fully hold her hand.

Thank you Seymour

 I have learned that the pain of a lost love will fade, But the memory of having loved will last forever.

Dark Angel
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13 posted 12-28-1999 06:01 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Oh, this is beautiful!!! Ain't love grand  
*sigh* loved it FK and I loved yours too, Ruth  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


 
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