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To W.H. (Repost)
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To W.H. (Repost) |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Note: "W.H." is the mysterious person that Shakespeare addressed most of his sonnets to. "N.T." is a special person in my life. To W.H. I write to you, whose charm remained unmatched, Preserved in endless rhymes of poet’s pen, To tell you that from all your graces hatched A soul, which bids perfection an amend. My tongue falls short to capture her in word, My hands -- to trace her likeness for your sight. Compare her to another? -- it’s absurd, For there is not another of her might. Imagine heaven’s most divine creation, Made even more divine by holy force, That even Gods would stand up in ovation To praise and thank this lovely angel’s source. There’s only one true beauty that I see, Allow me to address her as “N.T.” [This message has been edited by Master (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is beautiful Master! N.T should feel very lucky and special to have such a beautful poem written about her, from someone such as yourself! ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~ |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
She deserves it, I'm glad you liked it! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I know I shouldn't say this but when I saw the title of this, I thought to myself " Geesh, Shakespeare knew of Wanton Hussy as well?"...sorry Master, but in another life I was Victorian.. Some will know what I mean...LOL...Great poem and yes, she has to be worth at least your heart...bless and no strings either..  HUGS< !signature--> Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn. [This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-27-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
Ablsolutely ROFG@rainbow and Wanton.....lol across the seas two matched minds lolol don't mind us master.....it is a long time joke.....your poem is wonderful....and N T must be wonderful, anyway we see her as such through your eyes |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful, Master! (I think somebody's in love!)  Denise |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you everyone! and Denise in the words of my man Shakespeare, "out of the heart's affection in which I am in love" (or something like that)... LOL. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Will would have, himself, become enamored with your pen's work...lovely. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Truly loving...and lovely. Well done. |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA |
Thank you Meadowmuse, that's a very kind thing to say! (At times, I think so too... LOL) Thank you Severn, glad you liked it! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love it! Denise |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
This is very sweet....I bet she is very special...this "N.T."!!! Very lovely and straight from the heart!! By the way...I think Shakespeare was great!! Take Care Bridgette |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Excellent sonnet...I do hope you shared this with her |
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