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Elizabeth
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0 posted 12-26-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

A spirit, a beacon
To shine throught the night
To guide you to safety
Through many a plight;
And sounding through your darkness
Clear as a bell
The voice of the person
Who is your angel.
A rose, 'midst the weeds
Of grief and of pain
Reminding you that someday
Things will be alright again,
And like hot chocolate
On a chill winter day
They warm up your soul
And spirit all the way,
Someone chosen just for you
Above all the rest
For this is the one
Who can do the job best
To pierce throught your darkness
And spread warmth and light
A reminder of beauty
Setting sorrow to flight
You have been chosen
And so have been they
To be each other's angels
And guide through life's way.

Roses thorns/Rosebud
Feb. 9th, 1999
© Copyright 1999 Elizabeth - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 12-26-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Heavenly thoughts! Very lovely!  

 Denise


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2 posted 12-26-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I loved your poem, if only the angels would tell cupid when he's needed!!!
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3 posted 12-26-1999 10:46 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thank you, Denise and Devina! And Devina-if only we could! Wouldn't it be nice...

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4 posted 12-26-1999 10:47 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Roses,
You have some wonderful lines in this poem
Enjoyed the read.
Elizabeth
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5 posted 12-26-1999 10:52 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thanks much, Seymour. Glad you like it.

Roses thorns
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This has lots of beautiful lines in it...I enjoyed  
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Lovely Rt......

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8 posted 12-27-1999 05:07 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

I love it,I enjoyed it greatly

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

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9 posted 12-27-1999 05:32 AM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

Very very nice - and beautiful thoughts.

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Rose thorns, I like the poem. I agree with devina, maybe cupid is resting. Enjoyed the read.

 B Gravitt


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11 posted 12-27-1999 02:05 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Hoot, Pepper, Echo, Severn, Betty~thank you all very much!  

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Very well crafted verse!  I love this! My kinda thing it is!

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Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

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13 posted 12-27-1999 08:54 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Thank you, WhtDove, for reading it. I am glad you liked it.
      

Rt
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14 posted 12-27-1999 09:02 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Roses Thorns -
Angels are with us all the time.
This is a lovely reminder.
Very nice !
~*Marge*~


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