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Lost without you

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vandana
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0 posted 12-26-1999 05:46 PM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


I always see your smile,
But this time,
I didn't see you,
While I was asleep,
You walked away,
I'll never find you,
Singing my song,
I'll never see your smile,
But I don't know,
What I'll do without you,
Whever I see your picture,
I miss those days ,
We used to have fun,
Now you had to run away,
You packed your bags
leaving me
Without a note,
Didn't want me to find you gone,
I always wanted to kiss you,
First thing in the morning,
Butt I find you gone away from me,
I'm low,
When I switch off the light,
I'm lost
When I don't see you smile,
I'm lost,
When I'm without your love,
I'm lost without you
© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
devina
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1 posted 12-26-1999 06:11 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

I'm sorry to see that you're so sad
Cheer up sweetie!!
Echo Rhayne
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2 posted 12-27-1999 03:08 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

=o(  yeah cheer up *hugs*


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Betty Gravitt
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3 posted 12-27-1999 12:28 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

I'm so sorry to see you sad. Tomorrow is another day. I enjoyed the read.

 B Gravitt


Denise
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4 posted 12-27-1999 09:23 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Sad yet beautiful. Well done, vandana! I enjoyed this very much!

 Denise


Danny Holloway
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5 posted 01-18-2000 05:40 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Your words sent a message worthy to understand.  Nice work!
DH
Mike
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6 posted 01-18-2000 07:25 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Another nice one Vandana....  
Eloise
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7 posted 01-18-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Good poem Vandana, but sad.  
Tamera
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8 posted 01-18-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Tamera   Email Tamera   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Tamera

Cheer up! Hugs to you, beautiful poem, very sad....Tamera
Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 01-18-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

vandana,
  Another lovely poem. I am really enjoying your poetry
Liz
Sonny
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10 posted 01-18-2000 11:55 PM       View Profile for Sonny   Email Sonny   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sonny

Vandana-

   Love once you had - now gone, never to return it seems.  Have faith, for love is never gone.  It only fades to gain strength so you can love again...forever.

Sonny
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