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vandana
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0 posted 1999-12-26 05:46 PM



I always see your smile,
But this time,
I didn't see you,
While I was asleep,
You walked away,
I'll never find you,
Singing my song,
I'll never see your smile,
But I don't know,
What I'll do without you,
Whever I see your picture,
I miss those days ,
We used to have fun,
Now you had to run away,
You packed your bags
leaving me
Without a note,
Didn't want me to find you gone,
I always wanted to kiss you,
First thing in the morning,
Butt I find you gone away from me,
I'm low,
When I switch off the light,
I'm lost
When I don't see you smile,
I'm lost,
When I'm without your love,
I'm lost without you

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
1 posted 1999-12-26 06:11 PM


I'm sorry to see that you're so sad
Cheer up sweetie!!

Echo Rhayne
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since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
2 posted 1999-12-27 03:08 AM


=o(  yeah cheer up *hugs*


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


Betty Gravitt
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since 1999-09-11
Posts 222
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3 posted 1999-12-27 12:28 PM


I'm so sorry to see you sad. Tomorrow is another day. I enjoyed the read.

 B Gravitt



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-12-27 09:23 PM


Sad yet beautiful. Well done, vandana! I enjoyed this very much!

 Denise



Danny Holloway
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since 2000-01-15
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5 posted 2000-01-18 05:40 PM


Your words sent a message worthy to understand.  Nice work!
DH

Mike
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6 posted 2000-01-18 07:25 PM


Another nice one Vandana....  
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming
7 posted 2000-01-18 07:41 PM


Good poem Vandana, but sad.  
Tamera
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since 1999-12-28
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8 posted 2000-01-18 07:48 PM


Cheer up! Hugs to you, beautiful poem, very sad....Tamera
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
9 posted 2000-01-18 08:27 PM


vandana,
  Another lovely poem. I am really enjoying your poetry
Liz

Sonny
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since 1999-12-18
Posts 29
Schenectady, NY, USA
10 posted 2000-01-18 11:55 PM


Vandana-

   Love once you had - now gone, never to return it seems.  Have faith, for love is never gone.  It only fades to gain strength so you can love again...forever.

Sonny

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 2000-01-19 12:10 PM



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