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The Past Year

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far and away
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0 posted 12-26-1999 03:03 PM       View Profile for far and away   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for far and away

As I look back on the past year,
I held back all of my tears,
There was a lot hurt and pain,
And the tears should fallen like the rain,

Stuck living the life of hell,
Wanting to let out a scream or yell,
Looking for someone to talk to,
But who could be so true,

That is when I met you,
Saving me when I was blue,
Taking all the pain away,
Soothing my soul each  and everyday,

You listen to me when I was down,
Always taking away that dreaded frown,
Turning that frown into a bright smile,
I feel like we know each other for a while,

We have shared a lot with each other,
I trust you as much as I do my mother,
By showing that you care about me,
Our love will spread and breed,

I wish I was with you, now, on this xmas day,
As each day passes, I pray we have our way,
Together we shall be, with love that will last,
Wiping out all the pain, and erasing the past.


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Quiet Lightning
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since 12-26-1999
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1 posted 12-26-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

I liked the poem and I hope you write more.
Keep your head up.
Elizabeth
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2 posted 12-26-1999 10:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth   Email Elizabeth   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Elizabeth's Home Page   View IP for Elizabeth

Far and away, sounds like it was a year to remember.

Elizabeth

 Nail to the mast her holy flag,
Set every threadbare sail-
And give her to the god of storms,
The lightning and the gale!
-Oliver Wendell Holmes


WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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3 posted 12-27-1999 01:28 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Amen to happy endings!  

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


Echo Rhayne
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since 09-17-99
Posts 1538
Canyon Country, CA


4 posted 12-27-1999 05:00 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

This is great F.A.W.  Hope to read more soon!


 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Betty Gravitt
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since 09-11-99
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5 posted 12-27-1999 12:31 PM       View Profile for Betty Gravitt   Email Betty Gravitt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Betty Gravitt

I hope the new year holds wonderful things for the both of you. I like the poem. Keep them coming.

 B Gravitt


Artic Wind
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since 09-16-2007
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Realm of Supernatural


6 posted 11-12-2007 07:50 PM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
ramisf
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7 posted 03-15-2009 12:50 AM       View Profile for ramisf   Email ramisf   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ramisf

you cannot drive a car looking at the rear mirror. we should always look at the bright side of everything.. why wont you look at the accomplishments you made in the last year other than meeting that lady
 
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