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A good meal

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Quiet Lightning
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0 posted 12-26-1999 02:41 PM       View Profile for Quiet Lightning   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Quiet Lightning

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       A good meal
I know you had a hard day so just relax
I know you are hungry but you can't eat snacks
Come in my kitchen and have a seat
I'll set the table and we'll begin to eat
I prepared a dinner just for you
I hope you like the things I do
I cooked your favorite macaroni and cheese
along with hamhocks that are tasty with greens
It took me a while to make
but the peach cobbler is left in the oven to bake
The turkey is very tender
I mixed the vegatables in the blender
Thought you might like my well cooked dinner
This will be a day you'll remember
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Pepper
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1 posted 12-26-1999 03:13 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

I enjoyed this piece much QL...
And a big Welcome to Passions!!

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Denise
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2 posted 12-26-1999 04:10 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Welcome to Passions, Quiet Lightning! When do we eat?! Delicious poem!

 Denise


Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 12-27-1999 03:06 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Great poem, if this was written for someone they should feel darn lucky!!  The food, like the poem, sounds good!!

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

Jim Hastings
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4 posted 12-27-1999 03:08 AM       View Profile for Jim Hastings   Email Jim Hastings   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jim Hastings

Great poem, only thing is now I'm hungrey.
When do we eat?

 It's fantasy. But if it contains a piece of me doesn't that make it as real as I am?

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 12-27-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Oh, this one got to me...a meal and not one I cook myself...please, please tell me you're cooking it for me?..*g*

I love cheese and macaroni...not sure about the hemlocks though..ooops did you say hamhocks?...what are they?    )

Seriously, I just wanted to acknowledge the thoughts, little things mean a lot - to most of us...

Hugs

 Don't ask me where I'm going, just listen when I'm gone and far away you'll hear me singing softly to the dawn.



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 12-27-1999).]
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enjoyed

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