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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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0 posted 1999-12-26 09:35 AM


January Thaw


In things that are solidified
and my heart may
be just oneā€¦.
locked in this glacial
flow of feelings
slowly descending
from lofty mountain passes
moving stone
leaving debris
melting into emotions
that run in rivulets
turning streams into torrents.

Robert

© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 1999-12-26 10:15 AM


.....Just gotta keep the candle burning, eh???

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-12-26 12:46 PM


Wow...very well done Robert  
Balladeer
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3 posted 1999-12-26 01:00 PM


I like the thought of an avalanche of emotions. Nice, Robert.
Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08
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Pennsylvania
4 posted 1999-12-26 01:23 PM


This is wonderful!
Very well expressed. Perfect!
Liz

RobertB
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5 posted 1999-12-26 01:54 PM


Thanks all...I always felt that January thaws were a little sloppy.

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Pepper
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6 posted 1999-12-26 03:15 PM


Wonderful Robert....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
Shannon



Denise
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7 posted 1999-12-26 04:01 PM


Beautiful, Robert!  

 Denise



RobertB
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8 posted 1999-12-26 06:24 PM


Thanks again.....it was a fun poem to do.
Echo Rhayne
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Canyon Country, CA
9 posted 1999-12-27 03:11 AM


Beautiful Robert, its always nice to hear abouts oemthign so beautiful, written wonderfully, cause see here in So. Cali, there isnt anything to thaw in January LoL

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~


RobertB
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Champaign, IL
10 posted 1999-12-27 08:27 AM


you are so lucky Echo!!! You close to San Diego??? My cousin lives in Vista.

Robert

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
11 posted 1999-12-27 08:52 AM


Just January thaws?  Heck, emotional thaws are a bit sloppy too!  And since when did you thaw in January?  haha...I know you're close to me, so here's hoping for an early one!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark



Artic Wind
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12 posted 2007-11-12 07:50 PM


Enjoyed


ARCTIC WIND

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