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January Thaw

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RobertB
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0 posted 12-26-1999 09:35 AM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

January Thaw


In things that are solidified
and my heart may
be just one….
locked in this glacial
flow of feelings
slowly descending
from lofty mountain passes
moving stone
leaving debris
melting into emotions
that run in rivulets
turning streams into torrents.

Robert
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Nan
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.....Just gotta keep the candle burning, eh???
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow...very well done Robert  
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I like the thought of an avalanche of emotions. Nice, Robert.
Elizabeth Santos
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This is wonderful!
Very well expressed. Perfect!
Liz
RobertB
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Thanks all...I always felt that January thaws were a little sloppy.

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Wonderful Robert....

 A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!
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Beautiful, Robert!  

 Denise


RobertB
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Thanks again.....it was a fun poem to do.
Echo Rhayne
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Beautiful Robert, its always nice to hear abouts oemthign so beautiful, written wonderfully, cause see here in So. Cali, there isnt anything to thaw in January LoL

 ~*~ Hell is not a place of fire and a devil with a tail and horns. But a place of torment because the light of God is gone. To escape this, accept the blood of Jesus Christ! ~*~

RobertB
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you are so lucky Echo!!! You close to San Diego??? My cousin lives in Vista.

Robert
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Just January thaws?  Heck, emotional thaws are a bit sloppy too!  And since when did you thaw in January?  haha...I know you're close to me, so here's hoping for an early one!

 <*\\\><
Where there is faith,
there is love.
Where there is love,
there is peace.
Where there is peace,
there is GOD.
Where there is GOD,
there is no need.

Hallmark


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Enjoyed


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