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Anyone want to write a sci-fy on this? http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap120429.html

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VAS
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0 posted 04-29-2015 11:16 AM       View Profile for VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Thought it looked like it could be fun to write prose or poetry on this  
Anyone want to write a sci-fy on this? http://apod.nasa.gov/apod/ap120429.html


Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.
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Gliese 867d, your image feels like home to me,
oh Vulcans forge of mystery, you subjugate of gravity,
that beating heart from body torn, febrile flesh stripped to the bone,
Tears obsidian, shed alone, but still to me you feel like home.

Is this heaven?

shoeless Joe Jackson.

VAS
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2 posted 05-11-2015 10:40 AM       View Profile for VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Well done, Olias! I had a very difficult time locating this but finally clicked on the right spot.

I'm so glad I found it and was able to read your perspective on the pic. It's a fun interpretation!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

OLIAS
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3 posted 05-11-2015 04:32 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

Thank you so much for your kind words VAS,  I enjoyed the challenge

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