navwin » Discussion » Announcements & Links » On knowing when to quit!
Announcements & Links
Post A Reply Post New Topic On knowing when to quit! Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

0 posted 2008-11-29 04:36 PM


Through 400 poems and 2500+ (overall 'posts') during my traverse of these
fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land" along the cybersea, I hope that I have given
some small 'voice' to Nature; its stewardship by us; 'Universalism'; and the
tolerance/celebration of diversity; and, in the process, some respite from the
trials of hard reality for the readers herein via the 'magic' of poetic illusion.

© Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2008-11-29 07:56 PM


YES my dear friend Bruce..you most certainly have and we do thank you and cherish your golden words of nature ..keep on writing for us please my friend... love and hugs RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2008-11-29 08:11 PM


Your wonderful poetic voice is highly appreciated and loved, dear Bruce, so please don't mention leaving ...

Love,
Margherita

Alison
Deputy Moderator 5 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
3 posted 2008-11-29 08:13 PM


Yes, you have and you also have earned my respect and friendship.  My concern is with the title of this post.  What does it mean?  It better not be some form of goodbye - I won't accept it.  Nope, I won't.

Hugs to you, my dear friend, Bruce.



Alison

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
4 posted 2008-11-30 01:16 AM


Echoing Alison.  

Bruce, please don't go.  It is too painful - for you and for your friends and readers.  Ask me - I didn't last long away, as you know!

- Owl

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA
5 posted 2008-11-30 10:23 AM


Oh my, you aren't leaving, are you? Please don't go.
Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
6 posted 2008-11-30 10:35 AM


Dear Bruce, please tell me that you are not singing a swan song! Mind you, I would wager that you literally could sing like a robin. Your poems on Nature are music to my heart, soul, and senses. I beseech thee, dear poet, to deny us not the fruits of thy considerable talents.


Linda ~ a fan!


Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
7 posted 2008-11-30 10:39 AM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

That the hell is this?  Everyone dragging up or what?

We need your words from the woods.  Don't even think about going anywhere else.  Stay here.

Bobby

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
8 posted 2008-11-30 11:09 AM


Hi Bruce,we build a community here, this is overwhelming, your voice bring inestimable diversity to the site...You magnify with an unic voice and so universal way the nature and kept me breathless numerous times...I think we are never over with poetry and it is surely not an illusion (Homer and so many generous minds have used it to communicate with others,) Your talent is obvious and bring solace to other people but I surely would not give you an advice, we will have regrets unless you hacve decided  to change for another site, please inform us if you do so.... With all my respect.

yann

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
9 posted 2008-11-30 11:09 AM


We, all of us...  sometimes get discouraged
because so much of what we write comes from
a spot deep within...and we love caring
comments and criticism... You have a large
following of fellow poets...they are here,
all around you.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
10 posted 2008-11-30 11:30 AM


Hmmm...a breather perchance to dream?

On knowing when to quit...holding back the flow of imagery and cadence that is an interpretation of nature's life pulse?
Yes, quit holding back, and write man! Write!

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
11 posted 2008-11-30 01:37 PM


Stay with us. Although I do not post poetry , I do read. I do not have time to address each post but you are one I always read and enjoy. I wish as somewone mentioned once,  you could see the actual hits or reads so  you would know. "late"
secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
12 posted 2008-11-30 01:39 PM


I most assuredly do deeply appreciate everyone’s words of kind encouragement
and your readership of my ever-most-humble ‘word painted’ image scribbling! …
however, ‘life’ likely gets away from us all at some point and I have simply
‘devolved’ to that state so aptly described by T.S. Eliot:

"We are the hollow men
We are the stuffed men
Leaning together
Headpiece filled with straw...
Our dried voices, when
We whisper together
Are quiet and meaningless
As wind in dry grass
Or rats' feet over broken glass
In a dark and empty cellar..."

Perhaps things will 'turn around' but, I can not imagine how ...

iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
13 posted 2008-11-30 01:52 PM


Bruce, reading your last entry here.....how well I understand, as I myself, have been very absent from the forums.  

If absent you must be, then I wish for it not to be long and that you returned renewed and refreshed in your desire to put to words the vision of nature that only you capture and share so eloquently.  Hoping to see your written words here again in the future.........jo

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
14 posted 2008-11-30 02:06 PM


Back again to see if you might have given us a clue as to why you would be leaving. After having read in the reply that you wrote, perhaps I was a bit selfish in wanting you to stay. I can understand moments in our lives when we have to unhook and become "devolved".

I wish you well, and like Iliana so aptly stated, may you return "renewed and refreshed in your desire to put to words the vision of nature".


Bon (inner) voyage!
Linda



serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

15 posted 2008-11-30 02:39 PM


I understand the need for some silence and introspection. If you must go for a time, I understand, but I'd like to thank you for showing me some of the beauty in nature I would not otherwise have seen but through your pennings.

My gratitude.

Come back to us soon.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
16 posted 2008-11-30 03:28 PM


I can also understand the situation you find yourself in but I do know that creativity cannot be buried for long.  It's part of us no matter what life throws at us so I know you'll be back.  There are many of us who read and appreciate your work.  

Enjoy your rest and come back refreshed.  Perhaps it's not for us to imagine how things will turn around but just to intend it and know that they will - and then be patient.

Helen

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
17 posted 2008-11-30 04:02 PM


...
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
This is the way the world ends
Not with a bang but a whimper.

From The Hollow Men, T. S. Eliot--1925

Mistah Kurtz--he dead.

Bobby

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
18 posted 2008-11-30 06:08 PM


Dear Bruce, I so look forward not only to your wonderful poetry but to your wise and interesting comments as well. Your opinions and concerns give us all much to think about. I understand what you are saying because I feel the same way sometimes but I just want to let you know how much your presence on this sight means to me and I hope that you will decide to return to PIP
and all of us who will be missing you.

                         Your Friend Always,
                                   Ida

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
19 posted 2008-12-01 01:12 PM


It's also important to know...
when to return, perhaps refreshed and renewed.
It's been a rough few weeks for so many of us.
But with anchors such as passionate poets, we never stay adrift for long.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
20 posted 2008-12-01 03:24 PM


"hollow men...

In death's dream kingdom

Sunlight on a broken column
There, is a tree swinging
And voices are
In the wind's singing
More distant and more solemn
Than a fading star."

"We have lingered in the chambers of the sea...         
Till human voices wake us, and we drown."

What remains, but those "burnt-out ends of smoky days"
and all the "masquerades that time resumes"? ...

Midnitesun
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
21 posted 2008-12-01 03:40 PM


Tell that to Henry David and all the others who bothered to pen their incredible impressions, thoughts we still cherish daily.
You, too, have much to say, and do so in ways no one else can.

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
22 posted 2008-12-01 07:40 PM


“all time is eternally present
All time is unredeemable.

What ‘might have been’ is an abstraction…
in a world of speculation.
What might have been and what has been
Point to one end, which is always present.
Footfalls echo in the memory
Down the passage which we did not take
Towards the door we never opened”

the unwritten continuance:

What ‘is’ remains  
But  dissipated illusion
and the bitter void beyond
far too many doors
foolishly chosen,
Wrongly, irrevocably opened
along miss-taken passages.


Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
23 posted 2008-12-01 10:58 PM


Yo Secondhanddreampoet,

Please stick around if you can, as long as you can.

Bobby

Mysteria
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada
24 posted 2008-12-01 11:30 PM


Good luck with inventing new uses for your time.  I tend to come and go, but also knew when to quit as it was just taking up too much of my time to be completely honest.  I volunteer here, and read as best I can, but definitely my days of sitting for hours writing are now over, as there is not enough time in my days.

Again, good luck to you.  

        

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
25 posted 2008-12-02 04:59 PM


always a struggle, but your life is your
own and we should not burden you with our
selfishness.  Take care of yourself, ok?

Larry C
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Patricius
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
United States
26 posted 2008-12-14 12:47 PM


Well, the first thing I want you to know is my respect for you to make your own decisions. The second thing I'd like you to know is I have enjoyed your writing. I have an affinity for nature and so you see also for your pen. Peace.
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
27 posted 2008-12-14 06:16 PM


Bruce,

You will let us, as your poetic family,
know if we need to pray and or otherwise
guide our thoughts to anything dire in your
life; I am counting on that;

but if you simply need a vacation, and
wonder if your presence will be missed
at all, put that aside, now...for PiP
members rarely forget those who have made
an impact on our family [and chances are,
we haven't forgotten anyone!]

Time outs and holiday breaks and other reasons
are just celebratory guidelines of who we are
and who we are meant to be; and we must adhere
to reasons bigger than us at times. This includes:
irrational spouses
those unwilling to read our stuff, like co-workers
people who don't comprehend "I'm thinking!"
people who don't understand "I'm writing!"
lost times, when we can't quite comprehend some moment
that comes like surf, over and over again,
almost taking us to a brink we alone cannot
comprehend;

but through it all, Bruce, down deep in your soul,
you know that we ARE here, and no, we won't forget...at least not for some 20 years or more...AND

you will always remain Alive in the Archives....





Be well, my friend.


secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
28 posted 2008-12-24 12:16 PM


I REALLY (grandly) appreciate all the wonderful 'comment/reply' posts from all the fine folks in "P.I.P.land"  to my initial
one.  I have had a 'love/hate' relationship with 'poetry' most of my life.  Perhaps it because my 'scribblings' stand in such
stark contrast to 'real life' amid the current "Runaway American Dream"  ... that writing it seems so increasingly useless
(pointless) ...

Maybe it just won't let me 'quit' (an 'escapist addiction?') ... but, I sincerely keep trying!!

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Discussion » Announcements & Links » On knowing when to quit!

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary