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ballajosue
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hey guys im josue, im pretty new to the whole poetry scene but i love writing and literature overall. I started this site www.truewordslie.com made with wordpress lol just to write something every now and then because of lack of time. I was just looking forward to some criticism about my writings, dont matter if they're bad or good i would just like to improve and learn as i can, hope you pay it a visit, thank you.

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Your words are lovely and insightful, but I think they are more prose broken into lines, than poetry (though poetic prose, for sure!) Thanks for sharing the link. Keep writing!
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