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MysticValor
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0 posted 08-27-2003 10:21 PM       View Profile for MysticValor   Email MysticValor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for MysticValor

Hey everyone im new here, a friend told me to come here cuz she said there are alot of people here who know what they are doin. but heres my problem.
Recently i lost my girlfriend, and ive been trying to get her bac desperatly. ive tried everything. so what im planning on doin for my last stand isgiving her a rose and a poem, but the problem is, i don't know where to start on this poem, i want it to be so moving, so relating that she feels that im feeling. so if any of you can help get off to a start i would appreciate it thank you very very much!
magic_612
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1 posted 08-27-2003 11:01 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

I can't tell you exactly how to word your poem, but just write from the heart. only you know how you truly feel, and if you are completely open in your writing, hopefully your girl will feel it too. Good luck and welcome aboard.
yankees01rugby
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2 posted 08-27-2003 11:03 PM       View Profile for yankees01rugby   Email yankees01rugby   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for yankees01rugby

i would just write what your heart is saying. i dont know what you guys did together but you could that in there like all the good things that you remember, what she was like, how you felt when you first saw her or how you feel everytime you see her. im sorry thats prolly not very much help but i cant make anything up cause i dont know what you went through and if you want it to be special, i think it should come out of your brain. i hope everything works out for you!!

Love is like quicksand, the deeper you fall the harder it is to get out

 
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