Hi John, and welcome to Passions in Poetry.
Because the Teen Poetry forum is supposed to be intended for only posts that actually are poetry, I'm going to transfer your post into a discussion forum, where I believe it will get a better response.
And on the topic of this poem you would like, I understand that you are probably not very confident about the quality of your own poetry, but have you considered asking someone for guidance on a poem that you've written, perhaps? Instead of getting someone to flat-out write the poem for you, you could probably post a poem in any of our forums (especially Critical Analysis), and expect people to really help you in giving it a more professional presentation.
I wish you the best of luck with this situation, and again, welcome to Passions! I really hope you give your own poetry a chance and try to learn as much as you can here.
Learn to place poetry before people
Before you place your poetry before the people.
[This message has been edited by Local Parasite (10-21-2002 07:22 PM).]