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young_artist123
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since 2010-01-06
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0 posted 2010-01-06 08:33 PM


hey everyone i just wrote a new and first poem, im going to recite it to my friend on her birthday and i could realy use some help with it or just some comments on it thanks
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1 posted 2010-01-06 09:10 PM

I did comment and want to welcome you.  As a new member I think you will find more will comment and read, after you have spent some time familiarizing  yourself with some others poetry and responding or commenting in like.

Again, welcome - the poem was lovely!
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