Listening to every heart
Dhark, you received some good suggestions. Given that you've been around all of less than a week, you'll get to know us, and know our tendencies, just as we will come to know yours.
As for "feedback" if you really want some good critique, I would suggest that you might want to dip your pen into Critical Analysis. It's not as scary as it sounds
Once again, Welcome to Passions!