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The Great Onion
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since 2008-06-05
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0 posted 2008-06-05 10:19 PM



Hi, im new here; and no i dont need help on anything really. if anyone here has a good sense of rhyming, that would be TRULEY useful to me right now. im currently working on a couple of poems some are concrete poems and some are just, well.... poems that rhyme (Mostly poems that rhyme). And I'm gonna submit one of them to a poetry contest. without help right now, one of my poems are going for a crash course. Tips would do fine too.

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The Shadow in Blue
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since 2006-05-18
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1 posted 2008-06-06 02:06 PM


I would suggest you post your contest poem in the Critical Analysis forum then. Their you can get some constructive comments, moreso than the other forums.

Good luck,
Jill

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW


The Great Onion
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2 posted 2008-06-06 07:54 PM


well thanks, i probably overexaggerated the situation a little though lol.

The Great Onion
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3 posted 2008-06-06 07:57 PM


i cant find it, can someone help me find the critical analysis forums plz?

The Shadow in Blue
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4 posted 2008-06-06 08:10 PM


It is the first catagory under Poetry and Prose Workshops in the Main Forums.

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW


The Great Onion
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5 posted 2008-06-09 12:46 PM


Thx, you helped a lot. and  plz dont laugh if my poetry sucks XD.
The Great Onion
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since 2008-06-05
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6 posted 2008-06-09 01:46 AM


by the way, nice job for the personality thread. i have a poem there right now if you want to see it
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