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The Great Onion
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Hi, im new here; and no i dont need help on anything really. if anyone here has a good sense of rhyming, that would be TRULEY useful to me right now. im currently working on a couple of poems some are concrete poems and some are just, well.... poems that rhyme (Mostly poems that rhyme). And I'm gonna submit one of them to a poetry contest. without help right now, one of my poems are going for a crash course. Tips would do fine too.
The Shadow in Blue
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I would suggest you post your contest poem in the Critical Analysis forum then. Their you can get some constructive comments, moreso than the other forums.

Good luck,
Jill

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"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW

The Great Onion
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2 posted 06-06-2008 07:54 PM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

well thanks, i probably overexaggerated the situation a little though lol.
The Great Onion
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3 posted 06-06-2008 07:57 PM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

i cant find it, can someone help me find the critical analysis forums plz?
The Shadow in Blue
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4 posted 06-06-2008 08:10 PM       View Profile for The Shadow in Blue   Email The Shadow in Blue   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit The Shadow in Blue's Home Page   View IP for The Shadow in Blue

It is the first catagory under Poetry and Prose Workshops in the Main Forums.

JNS

"I celebrate myself, and sing myself,
And what I assume you shall assume,
For every atom belonging to me as good belongs to you."-WW

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5 posted 06-09-2008 12:46 AM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

Thx, you helped a lot. and  plz dont laugh if my poetry sucks XD.
The Great Onion
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6 posted 06-09-2008 01:46 AM       View Profile for The Great Onion   Email The Great Onion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Great Onion

by the way, nice job for the personality thread. i have a poem there right now if you want to see it
 
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