Saluting with misty eyes
There have been a few people that have split poems into separate pieces, as you hve suggested, and posted them separately. Give that a try, and put it into a slower forum as LP suggested... Just remember:
If you post it, they will come...
OK, OK... I'll stop
Actually, this thread came along at a really interesting time.. I am working on an "epic" poem about the battle of Iwo Jima. Watching how you handle your poem should let me know how to do mine.
They took pictures of our dreams
Ran to hide behind the stairs
And said maybe when it's right for you, they'll fall