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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
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0 posted 2002-05-27 06:27 PM

I'm writing a peice of poetry for someone who may or may not still be a member of PIP, so I can't post it, It's not finished but I would like some feedback on it so would anyone be willing to comment on rythmn, meter, language etc? if so how can I contact you?

Andrew

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2002-05-27 09:47 PM

I'd be happy to do that for you...

nan@netpoets.net

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2002-05-28 10:25 AM

We have a forum for that sort of thing. Why don't you try there?

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

3 posted 2002-05-28 03:52 PM

*isn't a totally dedicated member, but is still floating around here* Oh wait, you weren't talking about me, were you? *snickers* I'm gone now.

I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (05-28-2002 03:58 PM).]

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