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Marshalzu
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0 posted 05-27-2002 06:27 PM       View Profile for Marshalzu   Email Marshalzu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marshalzu's Home Page   View IP for Marshalzu

I'm writing a peice of poetry for someone who may or may not still be a member of PIP, so I can't post it, It's not finished but I would like some feedback on it so would anyone be willing to comment on rythmn, meter, language etc? if so how can I contact you?

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I'd be happy to do that for you...

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2 posted 05-28-2002 10:25 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

We have a forum for that sort of thing.  Why don't you try there?
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3 posted 05-28-2002 03:52 PM       View Profile for Skyfire   Email Skyfire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Skyfire

*isn't a totally dedicated member, but is still floating around here* Oh wait, you weren't talking about me, were you? *snickers* I'm gone now.

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