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dreamer1 12 5 24
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0 posted 2001-02-17 01:07 AM


I was going to post this in a poetry forum, but I decided I wouldn't waste peoples time with a poem that isn't very good, so I posted it here, because it's a rant. (The Alley is my favorite place in all of Passions! No dis to The Alley).

white white white
everywhere is white
snow snow snow
everything is covered in snow
yucky ugly accursed snow
ugly sickening nauseating white
everywhere
there is snow
the ugliest of all ugly things
everywhere
I cannot stand it!
snow
white
snow
white

snow

white

s n o w


w h i t e
s n o w

e
w

w
w

....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice any principle for the sake of it....
Robert Kaplan

© Copyright 2001 Adam Everett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-02-17 03:08 AM


don't forget the slush
and the salt on the cars which causes them t rot
and the frozen, plowed slush at the sides of roads that looks so dirty

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

Skyfyre
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2 posted 2001-02-17 03:26 AM


Whaddayatakkinabout...?

I LOVE snow!


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3 posted 2001-02-17 12:08 PM


Linda you stole my line ~pout~ (not that I have any legitimate claim I admit)

K


...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

T.G.M.

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4 posted 2001-02-17 12:25 PM


There's nothing wrong with snow....

after it melts that it.

Swamp¤Faeryie
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5 posted 2001-02-17 11:32 PM


i feel the exact same way aout white. I detest white,it's blank and ill and awful and stale!!! i hate white!!!! But i adore snow,i love it so much,snow makes me happy,but muddy slush crap makes me depressed because the whole world turns pale grey,sky and land both. GAG... so anyhow i relate to this.....

sam


Do i contradict myself?Very well i contradict myself.I contain multitudes.~walt whitman

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6 posted 2001-02-18 01:21 AM


DOWN WITH SNOW!!!!


I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

dreamer1 12 5 24
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7 posted 2001-02-19 09:09 PM


Thank you to most of you for your support. To the rest of you, bah humbug!!!

....peace as a primary objective is dangerous because it implies that we would sacrifice any principle for the sake of it....
Robert Kaplan

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