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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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0 posted 2001-02-07 07:21 PM


I do so want some of you to read my "Silly Valentine" because I think it's funny, and I wish to know if you agree.  It's a real contrast to my Broken Valentine, which is not really about a broken heart just a broken valentine.
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1 posted 2001-02-07 08:23 PM


I have read both VAS. . . and love them both. . .

Silly Valentine is indeed really funny. . . made me laugh out loud. . . while Broken Valentine (I love the idea of a "Broken Valentine" btw!!!) made my heart ache for the person in the poem. . .

Good job on them both!!!!



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2 posted 2001-02-08 08:01 PM


Will do!



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