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VAS
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0 posted 02-07-2001 07:21 PM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

I do so want some of you to read my "Silly Valentine" because I think it's funny, and I wish to know if you agree.  It's a real contrast to my Broken Valentine, which is not really about a broken heart just a broken valentine.
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1 posted 02-07-2001 08:23 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

I have read both VAS. . . and love them both. . .

Silly Valentine is indeed really funny. . . made me laugh out loud. . . while Broken Valentine (I love the idea of a "Broken Valentine" btw!!!) made my heart ache for the person in the poem. . .

Good job on them both!!!!



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.
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Will do!



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily
 
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