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chopsticks
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since 10-02-2007
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The US,


0 posted 03-07-2009 09:04 AM       View Profile for chopsticks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for chopsticks


I wish I had a sounding board ,
That would hook right up with me.
Someone with a poetic mind ,
To take a look , see what they see .  

Do I often use mixed meter .
Yes, darn it I certainly do .
I don’t regret that I do it .
I’ve heard that it is all right to .

Do I ever use bad grammar ,
Like using to instead of too .
Maybe some day I’ll get better ;
But that time is way over due .

Do I ever miss spell a word
That is cutting  me to the deep
Well yes I do, some of the time,
But  I  try to never loose sleep

Do I use a lot of clichés.
That, you can bet your boots I will.
Now I have to get a move on.
I am late for work at the mill .
© Copyright 2009 My brother John. - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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since 12-27-2002
Posts 8464
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1 posted 03-07-2009 09:10 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I see what you did there...and I love it!

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

turtle
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since 01-23-2009
Posts 491
Harbor


2 posted 03-07-2009 01:56 PM       View Profile for turtle   Email turtle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for turtle

Hi chops,

It looks like your structured verse is improving. It also looks like you're getting help. That's good.

chopsticks
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3 posted 03-07-2009 06:12 PM       View Profile for chopsticks   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for chopsticks

Thank you Susan. It doesn’t  get any better than ~ I love it ~
 
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