But I didn't see her I'm afraid. Sisko, how many people do you think get broken
hearted and write a poem about lost love?
Or better yet, how many people get broken hearted and don't write a poem about
lost love. The number is probably less.
In order to write something that is better than ALLLLLL those poems written over
hundreds....thousands of years, holds your effort up against alot of great and
unmatchable poetry. It is better to ponder and describe a milk carton than lost
You clearly need help here, I don't know if I can help. I would suggest reading
everything you can find on the web about writing poetry and try reading some
I don't know your age, or background in writing, but it looks like you're just getting
started. If you're a teen or there about, you might think of posting in the teen
forum. If not, you could try a poetry workshop. Once you get a little better
understanding of poetry, I'd be glad to help you.
/please read and comment on someone else's poem. either here or in another
forum. I know that many people feel too unqualified to comment, and you are not
required to comment, but the less experienced reader's input is important to the
writer as well. Doing this also helps you learn about poetry......and it makes me