Any opinions or suggestions, or anything that you have to offer would be greatly appreciated. I'm always looking to improve. I just wrote this in about 10 minutes and wanted to know how is it. May add more..
How many stars do I have to wish upon?
Do I have to toss all of my pennies into a fountain?
Must I swim to the depths of the deepest ocean?
Or should I reach the peak of the highest mountain?
When someone asks what I'll do to be with you..
I'll gladly say all of the above.
Because baby there isn't nothing that could keep me..
from trying to get some of your love.
If you happen to see dandelions flying in the wind,
you don't even have to guess.
Honey I have it bad for you,
and to the world I would confess.
You're wonderful, magnificent,
and utterly divine.
I will continue to dream, wish, and hope,
that someday you'll be mine.