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poddarku
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0 posted 02-24-2009 06:10 AM       View Profile for poddarku   Email poddarku   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for poddarku


To Margherita, birthday poem
----------------------------
I brought a birthday bird.
Though birthday means
changing one cage for another;
I brought the bird to be freed
forever.
And God was meant to bless her
for this act of kindeness.
“So where is it?” she asked me.
I opened my heart.
She could hear the batting wings.
=© 2009 - All Rights Reserved Kushal Poddar

clever talks delay friendship!

© Copyright 2009 poddar kushal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-24-2009 05:43 PM       View Profile for turtle   Email turtle   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for turtle

Hi poddarku,


I'm a little confused here. Are you posting this in CA for Margherita to find, or are you looking for
critiques?

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