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Lost of the past are thee
Blinded by the ego of thou
Foward unto the future
Lower thy brow

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this poem is very cool.  much contained in a small space.  using antiquidated language to speak to someone who had lost their past is like a smart-ass slap in the face.  And to suggest that the future will require our de-evolution is pretty smart.  The modern man is indeed getting dumber.
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