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Monk Frost I!
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Stare into a mirror
Through a single pane of glass
Adore the reflection
For your image will soon pass

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Heed ye Narcissus' sample here
A haftling turned by selflove's mere
He shunned the maid he ought adore
And loved his self-reflection more,
In the which appetitious thought
That witsick wight his death begot.
But yet upon his lifeend's hour
He left behind a lovely flower.


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Essy,

That's a keeper.

Well done
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