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Monk Frost I!
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0 posted 02-15-2009 01:35 AM       View Profile for Monk Frost I!   Email Monk Frost I!   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Monk Frost I!

Taken all my years
To grasp life
Along with fear
The taste of strife
Tired of tears
At last I laugh
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1 posted 03-12-2009 05:02 PM       View Profile for Grinch   Email Grinch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Grinch


Perhaps you could shorten the last line to create a more punctuated ending. Something like:

I laugh

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For instance:

Itís taken years
To grasp life
Itís fears
The taste of strife
Tired of tears
I laugh

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