“ I can’t stand free verse “
Good morning Free, I kind of like that way of thinking.
“ I'll also try to see if I can get that book, we don't really have money, but I'll try to convince my parents to buy it for me. “
I wonder what part of that sentence they don’t understand.
Anyhow there is some good help on here if it happens to come along. They won’t tell you
to go buy a book, they’ll tell you what’s in that book.
However, if you could, have your parents get you a poetry tutor.
Though it is in 1st person, I wasn’t trying to portray myself. I was trying to show someone
-who pushes people away, to be alone
-who thinks that they are better off living in the dark unaware of others, as they also are unaware of him/her.
-who realizes that being alone isn’t so great, yet realizes it, too late.”
It may be time again to point out what the poem was about.
I think you did a good job showing that.