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synthetic
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0 posted 2009-01-29 03:56 AM


Try solving the equations of love:
Without the measures of time; patience; tolerance; understanding and forgiveness required.
Make an attempt at reaping from love's soils all it has to offer;
Without first having exposed every last attribute of yourself you know of and then some.
Love as though pride could know no existence, through your existence -
Love as though all it would take was for them to realize how you loved them, for them to love you.
Love bares the face of a person, a place, an odour, a sound or a feel.
Love is so elusive, yet so obvious;
That when it is in plain view, it blinds you.
True love allows you to take the back seat, because it knows no glory.
True love allows you to wait, because it is timeless.
True love allows you to forgive, because it is merciful.
True love keeps you right where you are, even when you swear you are gone -
True love is your jailor.

I have grown into myself, and so my love has become deeper.
It is from my soul:
It is classical and poetic;
It is also longer lasting than a stick of Five gum on Energizer steroids.
My love is multi-faceted, almost schizophrenic;
My love is strong, almost obsessive;
My love is blind, almost taking you out of the picture;
My love is real.
My love has been there, is there, will be there;
My love gave birth to itself, is self-sustaining, and will most likely burn itself out;
My love is my hobby, it is my greatest gift, it is you;
My love is real.

My love is real because it vowed to never die:
Keeps a get out of jail free card in its back pocket and has Machiavelli on speed dial.
It keeps me alive when I'm asleep,
It keeps me dreaming during the day -
My love is real because you are.
My love is real because it has to be, because I don't want to be crazy;
And it's the only logical explanation for what it is I'm feeling,
For what it is that I smell and taste when you cross my mind.
My love is real because I need for it to be, because it is my reason.
My love is everything to me, because you are.
I've tried solving the equations of love:
I've measured with time; patience; tolerance; understanding and forgiveness -
In the end it equaled to you.

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